Feedback on a new "song-in-progress"

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May 1, 2009 at 07:17 am - by pandarose (2 Posts)
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Hey!  I'm working on a song and posting my progress on here as i go.  It's be awesome to get some constructive feedback from people.  This is the first time I've ever shared a work in progress with anyone, and I'm curious to see how it goes.  

 https://freshbrain.org/sites/all/files/various/morning.mp3

 Let me know what you think and please rate and comment on the project! 

July 13, 2009 at 07:21 pm - by completedemotion (1 Posts)
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I quite like this, and would love to try to make this into an actual song

July 12, 2009 at 02:07 am - by son0 (5 Posts)
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this would be good with some heavy metal guitar and some crazy bass riffs.. i'm just kidding

 BUt you do have good vocals very clear and I was wondering what do you have in mind for the melody?I would really like to know what genre your going to make it. Also is this just yourself or is it with someone else i hear two people at around 13 or is that just a vocal melody

June 10, 2009 at 01:13 pm - by jerseyguitar (1 Posts)
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I think its pretty good it has a unique sound to it. Do you plan on adding instruments or keeping it just vocals? I think maybe a good simple piano would be good behind your vocals. Keep up the work it's really good.
June 2, 2009 at 06:39 pm - by JBugMelody (1 Posts)
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I think that its going well in progress!  The harmonizing is amazing! :)